benbene123 发表于 2023-11-28 16:00   全显示 1楼
妻心作为早年的神作，让我回味了好几遍。看到妖大又重出江湖，还是很令人兴奋的。但最近几章看下来，有点索然无味，妖大的想象力感觉有点力不从心。我记得很久之前也看到过一篇断更的以杨桃子为视角的同人文，和妻心相辅相成，很有看点。提个小建议，妖大是否也可以考虑重开一篇，以经典的杨桃子为主角，侧面来描写下林茜的心理变化。绿文最大的吸引点，还是女主逐渐堕落的过程，比如从乳交、颜射、戴套，无套、外射、内射等，这样一个渐进的过程，来体现林茜怎样一步步滑入深渊。
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